Hello folks,
I see a lot of "After Action Report" or "Let's Play", basically thread where you day-to-day explain what you are doing.
A few advice about this :
1. Screenshoots, screenshoots, screenshoots !
That's the most important.
Wall of texts are really dry. No one will read it. I won't. Screenshoots (several by days when there is combat) will allow to understand way better than 200 words, and let your text breath.
For editing screenshoots, I recommand Faststone Capture. For hosting, Imgur is enough.
2. In-character correspondance & theme
Talk to the other players in-character, even if the "in-character" is comedy or whatever. Some of the other players will play their role, and something fun and organic will emerge.
Further to this, gives a consistant style to your writing (first person "I am personally invested and the commander", first person "I am an analyst and I see things coldly", third person "history book", third person "heavily biased history book" ...).
Having a common theme/quirk that binds together your different days [for instance in my signature the short cartoon before each day] also gives character and quality to your AAR.
3. Explain what you are doing // your doctrine
Instead of just saying "I am building light tanks", explain why you build Light Tanks and not infantry, or armored cars, or just nothing. If you think that Light Tanks are just overall better, than your personal doctrine is "light tank", explain why you like Light Tanks so much.
Similarly, if you choose one ally over another - why so ?
4. Do both day-by-day AND thematically
Doing stuff day-by-day allows you to neatly organize things and give a standard "speed of progress" for your readers, rather than having 1 week in one post, one day in another.
Days are not as packed as other, days of peace don't have much that happens. So what you should do is use those downtime to talk about your long term strategy, your doctrine, etc.
5. Put a summary in your first post
You can link to specific messages (eg to day 2) ; use this to put a summary of where to stand at the beginning.
It will :
- Help you quickly find old posts, trust me you will need it
- Immediately indicate to new readers that this is active
- Makes your whole Let's Play look professional.
Honestly, the Let's play in my signature is a good reference 
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Perhaps I was copying you when I did my poland thing that got this all started....Chimere wrote:
Honestly, the Let's play in my signature is a good reference
And for those of you that can't upload screenshots, you have to make sure the file is JPG not PNG
Another tip: Give your nation a goal. In your Dominican Republic game, you spread the right kind of Christianity. Mexitaco spreads tacos. Murica spreads McDonald‘s. It gives your let’s play a better feel. It will also give your character’s motivation. That’s what I have to say.
I feel like this is directed at me 
Maybe...
But my reports r good... right?
Yep
Yes, GrandEmpire, your reports are good. You are an excellent orator, and you give a balanced feel. This will just give reports more life. However, your reports, in the style that they are written, don't need to do this.
You can't defeat the self-proclaimed master of Bad-Reporting, 'Karl von Krass'!!GrandEmpire wrote:
I feel like this is directed at me
I broke every single advice on this thread. YOLO
I used almost every single one, even the screenshots, but no one seems to read my threads
You follow these tips, but you need to add oratorical skill to your threads. People do read your threads, though.
Very less, one or two or three maybe?BrutusTrump wrote:
You follow these tips, but you need to add oratorical skill to your threads. People do read your threads, though.
Assign people roles like what I did in my Italy thread.
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